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Longing for redemption,
longing for release...
Another submission to SixWordStories . ^.^
Hope you guys like it. Black Rose 
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The-Silver-Rose599 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel that everyday.
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:iconchristiahlove:
christiahlove Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Student Writer
My heart goes out to you. Heart Huggle! 
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:iconthe-silver-rose599:
The-Silver-Rose599 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ♥:)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
The past doesn't go away, does it? :(
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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Student Writer
Not for a veeeery long time.
They say "Time heals all wounds, unless you pick at them."
Let's see how true that is, shall we? :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I'm always picking at wounds. Both literally and figurativelly.
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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Student Writer
As am I... But we must preserve. We must stay strong. Keep your head up high my friend. Heart  
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
You're right. And I'll do my best. :heart:
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:iconchristiahlove:
christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
As will I. Let's keep swimming together, shall we? Warm you 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Sure :huggle:
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RainReedshimmer Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Redemption from what?  

Just curious?


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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Writer
Redemption from the bad that I've done and that has been done to me.
I feel that many of us tend to feel this way at one point. :/
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RainReedshimmer Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmm not sure about that one?
Who redeems this behaviour?
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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Writer
Redemption can be seen as a religious concept or as an plea for being emotionally saved.
In this case, I felt that it was more of the latter, directed toward anyone or anything that could save me and
prevent me from falling deeper into emotional turmoil.
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RainReedshimmer Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Interesting!

I guess the human nature is very complex and we too easily become intricately bound to our emotions - tangling ourselves in a impenetrable web of confusion, guilt, remorse etc......

I hope you don't mind me asking questions.....i'm just a curious sort......


I like these words you have chosen, not so much from a religious perspective, more philosophical -the words remind me of the fragility and egotistic nature of the human personality.....


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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Student Writer
I agree with your logic. And no, I don't mind at all. In fact, I appreciate that you've decided to take a deeper look into these six words.
Thank you very much for your kind words and for sharing your perspective on this concept. :)
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RainReedshimmer Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

You're very welcome

I have enjoyed this profound sixwordstory!

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