A lot conveyed in a few words. Very nice.
yes. this is the explanation i needed to show to others.
Pretty much what others are saying; very powerful for 6 words, hard to do in itself (at least for me), nicely done. Makes me sad to think about it deeply though. Wonderful piece though.
Thank you so much for kind words and support.
You're welcome! Please keep writing, your talents will grow each time that you do. :3 Honestly, I'm not even a poem person, but what I saw here today will make me change my mind, at least a little. This really did have so much meaning, in so little words. Something I admire and would like to accomplish one day myself (maybe not in poetry form, but just writing in general).
Keep writing. :3
You have no idea. You made me smile widely. Thank you for brightening my day. ^.^ And yes, please write some poetry! I would love to see what you conjure. You keep writing as well. Thank you again for your kind words and support. I truly do appreciate it.
I feel like the ellipses might be drawing a bit of the power out, but other than that I really like it.
Very powerful, but I am not sure that the capitals are necessary. Maybe just let the words speak for themselves?
Thank you for the kind words and the advice. You know, I think I'll do just that. x) Thank you for sharing your opinion and suggestion. ^.^
Such a deep message in 6 words! Brilliant.
Better than nothing, right?
*Sigh...* I guess... Plus the scarring experiences molded me into the person that I am today.
It was long ago now, and when I was young and innocent it did feel like home. But that began to change, and one day it was just a house...
I'm very sorry to hear that... I can relate, so I share your pain. Keep your head up high... *Hugs*
I went through that kinda of thing as well, though in many different ways.
The least emotional being the fact that I moved multiple times a year, never staying in one house for very long.
That would be so difficult... No being able to truly form bonds with others... I'm so sorry to hear that Bishop. :/
So true, I have that too.