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Always
  a house

Never
  a home...
Pretty much sums up the environment that I grew up in...
Enjoy. :)

And thanks to Messerfly for the suggestion of keeping the words "house" and "home" lowercase. ^.^
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:iconenjoymystorybook:
enjoymystorybook Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!wonderful! :heart:
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:iconchristiahlove:
christiahlove Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Writer
Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle 
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8Volaticus8 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A lot conveyed in a few words. Very nice.
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:iconchristiahlove:
christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much. :)
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8Volaticus8 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome.
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InsomniaPoetry Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Student General Artist
yes. this is the explanation i needed to show to others.
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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Student Writer
sad nod Japan emote Cutie Sad Nod :sadnod: 
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lillstar Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
so true..
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:iconchristiahlove:
christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Student Writer
:heckyes: :heckyes: :heckyes: 
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kitty8688theonly Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
Pretty much what others are saying; very powerful for 6 words, hard to do in itself (at least for me), nicely done. Makes me sad to think about it deeply though. :( Wonderful piece though.
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:iconchristiahlove:
christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much for kind words and support. Heart 
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kitty8688theonly Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
You're welcome! Please keep writing, your talents will grow each time that you do. :3 Honestly, I'm not even a poem person, but what I saw here today will make me change my mind, at least a little. This really did have so much meaning, in so little words. Something I admire and would like to accomplish one day myself (maybe not in poetry form, but just writing in general).

Keep writing. :3
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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Writer
You have no idea. You made me smile widely. Thank you for brightening my day. ^.^ And yes, please write some poetry! I would love to see what you conjure. You keep writing as well. Thank you again for your kind words and support. I truly do appreciate it. Heart 
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winterkate Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Writer
I feel like the ellipses might be drawing a bit of the power out, but other than that I really like it.
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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much!!! And I appreciate the suggestion. :)
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:iconwinterkate:
winterkate Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Writer
You're really welcome!
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Messerfly Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
Very powerful, but I am not sure that the capitals are necessary. Maybe just let the words speak for themselves?
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:iconchristiahlove:
christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you for the kind words and the advice. You know, I think I'll do just that. x) Thank you for sharing your opinion and suggestion. ^.^
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Messerfly Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
You are very welcome. 
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Such a deep message in 6 words! Brilliant. :aww:
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:iconchristiahlove:
christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much!!! I truly do appreciate your kind words. ^.^
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SereneCyrene Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Student General Artist
No problem!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
:hug:
Better than nothing, right?
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:iconchristiahlove:
christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student Writer
*Sigh...* I guess... Plus the scarring experiences molded me into the person that I am today. Heart 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Indeed, the past made us who we are, for better or worse. :)
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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Writer
Right you are. Huggle! 
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Thanks :hug:
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Edges-to-Everything Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
It was long ago now, and when I was young and innocent it did feel like home. But that began to change, and one day it was just a house...
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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student Writer
I'm very sorry to hear that... I can relate, so I share your pain. Keep your head up high... *Hugs* Huggle! 
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Edges-to-Everything Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
:thanks:, you too!
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BishopOfWakes Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer

I went through that kinda of thing as well, though in many different ways.

The least emotional being the fact that I moved multiple times a year, never staying in one house for very long.

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:iconchristiahlove:
christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student Writer
That would be so difficult... No being able to truly form bonds with others... I'm so sorry to hear that Bishop. :/ Heartbreaker 

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BishopOfWakes Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's fine! ^~^ The upside is that I've seen some interesting places! I.. I write poetry to fill the gap, I guess.
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LOST-RAIN-POET Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So true, I have that too. 

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:iconchristiahlove:
christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Student Writer
I'm very sorry to hear that... Keep your head up high. Heart 
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LOST-RAIN-POET Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Always! 
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