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My world has crumbled
to black and white
Dulled to a rainbow
of grays
Hardly a wisp
of color in sight...

Only darkness remains.
I was feeling really depressed... And this is what my mind conjured.
Hope you like it. :)
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this. Its very good.
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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much!!! ^.^
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Whyles Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Simple yet filled with emotion and meaning. My kind of poem :)
I hope you feel better soon :hug:
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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you for your kind words... Eventually... I hope.
I hope you get better as well. Rose 
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
You're welcome. 
And thanks. :huggle:
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BishopOfWakes Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is really good, honestly. :) I've read a lot of poetry, and most people seem to think it revolves around rhyming or length. This, however, is good poetry. Honest, raw emotion. <3
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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much! That means so much to me. ^.^
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BishopOfWakes Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Of course, Love. It's well deserved. :) If you'd like, I recently posted a few pieces of my own.
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christiahlove Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Writer
You're a lovely writer and your poems touch my heart. Pixel Rose 
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:iconbishopofwakes:
BishopOfWakes Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm honored you find them so touching. <3
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