My world has crumbled
to black and white
Dulled to a rainbow
Hardly a wisp
of color in sight...
Only darkness remains.
I was feeling really depressed... And this is what my mind conjured.
Hope you like it.
I really like this. Its very good.
Simple yet filled with emotion and meaning. My kind of poem
I hope you feel better soon
Thank you for your kind words... Eventually... I hope.
I hope you get better as well.
This is really good, honestly. I've read a lot of poetry, and most people seem to think it revolves around rhyming or length. This, however, is good poetry. Honest, raw emotion. <3