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From dusk to dawn,
my soul...
it lingers

cold and
alone

in this desolate place
that we call
reality.

Though inhabited
by many,
these are

bleak and
forsaken grounds.

I feel that
I'm trapped
with no way out,
no escape,
no bliss
awaiting me...

Without a future,
without a purpose,

my yearning soul...
it roams
this earth;
this grave...

As the darkness
continues to
consume me...

As the numbness
feeds on
the remnants
of my sanity
a little
each day.
I think most of us have felt this way at one point in our lives...
Hope you like it. :D
 Keep your head up high and keep fighting. Heart Black Rose 
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Ashbrie13 Feb 27, 2014  Student General Artist
this is absolutely stunning, good job!
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christiahlove Feb 27, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you ever-so much for the kind words! And for the fave! ^.^
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Ashbrie13 Feb 28, 2014  Student General Artist
np
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LiquidGraphite Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really love your minimalist style here, it really makes you take the words as they are...more heavy. At least for me it makes their meaning that much more pertinent. Very nice :)
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christiahlove Jan 30, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much for your kind words and praises. I'm very glad that you enjoyed this piece. :)
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OrientalArc Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
this is great.. I like it..
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christiahlove Jan 29, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much for your kind words. :)
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RoadToWhatever Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That dull aching feeling of nothingness, is what this reminds me of.
Lovely poem, really well written :).
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christiahlove Jan 29, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much. Oh yes, that numbness that rots in your chest to the point that it hurts. I can relate. NaNoEmo - Day 2 
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adamantRavel Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Salute, sister in anguish
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